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I knew you on Monday
loved you on Tuesday –
by Wednesday
you’d taken ahold of my heart
Thursday was pancakes
and warm maple syrup
By Friday – we planned
for the pulling apart
Saturday came
with the crushing of thunders –
erasing my fears
with your charms
Sunday I swore
you were nothing worth keeping
but laughed
as you rolled in my arms
A week of forever –
a lifetime made over
to fit in the place where the lies
used to be
Smelling of cedar
I kept every treasure
and wondered if ever –
you’d happen to me
Splinters and sweetgum
stars for the taking
Wrap me in Monday –
the first I dreamed of
Tell me you’re leaving
but stay for the morning –
lest night make you someday
the Tuesday I loved
Wendell A. Brown AKA The Brown One Poet said:
Sounds like true love…there is never a dull moment! Many more good than bad!
Loved the poem!
tornadoday said:
Actually, I thought it sounded more like a country song! LOL! But could be true love too! Thanks, Wendell. I’m so very glad you liked this! Quite honestly, I’m convinced most anything we know is more good than bad (it’s all a matter of what you’re looking for). Love you, Me
granbee said:
So much happiness packed into a single week!
tornadoday said:
Indeed, Rose…………but I am sure you’re like me – you’ve already figured out that every day is AMAZING when you’re looking for it to be!! Thank you so much. I hope you’ve been able to unspam my comments. I love your stories for reasons you already know. ~ Love you, Rose. ~ Bobbie
ordinarylifelessordinary said:
Romantic and sweet Bobbie x
tornadoday said:
Thank you so much, Vanessa………although I’m not sure that I’d classify the thoughts that inspired this as ‘sweet’……. LOL! 🙂
ordinarylifelessordinary said:
Perhaps it was all the pancakes, syrup and sweetgum….sweet for a while there at least, then maybe bittersweet? Xx